Wednesday, 27 July 2011

The Ring of Ice Part Three

Part Three


Rebeckka Doldrum strode down the dark hallways, instinctively pausing before ducking to avoid the fist of a concealed assailant. Rebeckka sprung back and fired a concussive blast of air at her attacker who swiftly avoided the missile and returned it with a knife thrust to the head. Rebeckka deflected the blow off her gauntleted fist and pinned the wielder of the knife up against the wall.
"Who are you working for?" she demanded, pushing what at first glance appeared to be a man harder against the rough brick of the wall. She now saw that the man had a single eye in the middle of his forehead, a cyclops, a minion of the Fist of Justice.
"Kane was foolish to send you after me, perhaps I will send him your charred remains in an envelope, or a photograph of your bloody corpse," she mused threateningly, lifting him off his feet by the throat. The cyclops whimpered at the brutality of her threats, (and at the tight grip of her hands around his throat). Suddenly, a crash sounded from further along the corridor, "I'll have to deal with you later," she said, dropping the cyclops, and dispatched him into unconciousness with a solid uppercut that sent him smashing back against the wall. Rebeckka gave the cyclops a smart kick and then sped off back up the corridor, finding a startled-looking boy with fire in both hands, she briefly considered that he was only about 13 before dismissing the thought and pushed at the air, sending him flying off his feet and then curled her fingers, stopping his movement abruptly, "who are you, boy? and what are you doing here, are you another servant of that detestable Necromancer, the Justice?" she asked, like an interrogator with a particularly nasty criminal. "No, my name is Pyro-Dawn Tyromant, I came here with my guardian, to fight the Fist, I.."The boy trailled off at the expression of malevolent doubt on Rebeckka Doldrum's face. "Rebeckka, he's with me," a figure in the shadows told her. "Octaboona, could it be?" Rebeckka aked in disbelief. "Yes, it is I," said Octaboona Ambrosius, stepping out of the shadows into full view, "put down the boy, we are here to find Chanoro Flashfreeze".....             

6 comments:

  1. OMG,
    Chan this Story is AMAZING i love it
    Cant wait for part 4!!

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  2. ...

    Hmm...

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    What side is Chanoro on?

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    I mean...

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    Are Pyro, Octa, and, possibly, Rebeckka Dolrum, looking for him as an ally or as an enemie?

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    ...Yeah...

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    That's all I have to ask...

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    ...At this specific point of time...

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  3. OMG this is awesome! cant wait for more!! XD

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  4. OH MY GOSH! I LOVE THIS! So exciting! Brilliant writing Chan!
    :D
    Rebeckka is one tough cookie! I hope she and my oc get along! ;P
    *shivers*

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  5. I love it XD Rebeckka's got style in fighting, I like :-)

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  6. Thanks everyone, will write more. Pyro, They will all be on the same side, oops, spoilers.

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